Research and Planning: 13/20 (C) Construction: 34/60 (D)
Targets: • To improve your Research and Planning try to include more explanation of the effect of technical elements in your analysis of music magazines, and consider what props, costumes, colours, etc, signify. • Complete a second set of drafts incorporating your ideas for fonts and colour schemes. • Complete a production plan. • Add more coverlines to front cover, and consider using a little more variety if font styles and colours. • Don’t hyphenate the Wireless coverline and remove the cross. • Add a page number to the contents page. • There is far too much empty space on the contents page, and I’m not sure about your coverlines. It doesn’t fit with the brand identity established on the cover. Consider using three columns – one for the editor’s letter, then two columns of contents of contents. Look at the examples below of contents pages: • http://linzidunhamasmedia.blogspot.com/2011/02/product-final.html • http://rachelashby12.blogspot.com/search?updated-max=2011-03-24T02:49:00-07:00&max-results=7 • http://robynprattis.blogspot.com/2011/05/improved-final-products.html • Consider adding a pull-quote to the top of the left hand page of the double page spread. • Make the font size of your article text smaller.
You currently have 59% overall, which is a high D. You have made very impressive progress over the last half term, and have caught up with your coursework well. You now need to complete the suggested improvements in order to achieve the higher grade you are capable of. You should be looking to achieve at least a B grade for your coursework.
Research and Planning: 13/20 (C)
ReplyDeleteConstruction: 34/60 (D)
Targets:
• To improve your Research and Planning try to include more explanation of the effect of technical elements in your analysis of music magazines, and consider what props, costumes, colours, etc, signify.
• Complete a second set of drafts incorporating your ideas for fonts and colour schemes.
• Complete a production plan.
• Add more coverlines to front cover, and consider using a little more variety if font styles and colours.
• Don’t hyphenate the Wireless coverline and remove the cross.
• Add a page number to the contents page.
• There is far too much empty space on the contents page, and I’m not sure about your coverlines. It doesn’t fit with the brand identity established on the cover. Consider using three columns – one for the editor’s letter, then two columns of contents of contents. Look at the examples below of contents pages:
• http://linzidunhamasmedia.blogspot.com/2011/02/product-final.html
• http://rachelashby12.blogspot.com/search?updated-max=2011-03-24T02:49:00-07:00&max-results=7
• http://robynprattis.blogspot.com/2011/05/improved-final-products.html
• Consider adding a pull-quote to the top of the left hand page of the double page spread.
• Make the font size of your article text smaller.
You currently have 59% overall, which is a high D. You have made very impressive progress over the last half term, and have caught up with your coursework well. You now need to complete the suggested improvements in order to achieve the higher grade you are capable of. You should be looking to achieve at least a B grade for your coursework.